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Edit: Fixed the grammar errors  






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Page nine! Sorry for the wait!

I'm really satisfied of this page and my favourite panel is the third one In that panel Hurit turned out exactly as I immagine her But Mahkan turned out really well too
In the fourth panel Dyami is complaining cuz Aquene is tossing in her sleep.
Hurit and Mahkan are having a heated discussion and Mahkan is a bit surprised by her behavior. It's really rare that the she-wolf "attacks" him so harshly.

In the third ballon I forgot the "n" after "a" and before "enemy" XD Oh! and I've forgotten the "r" at the end of "you" in the phrase "And if this happened to your son"
My apologies if there are other grammar errors. When I'll finish this chapter I'll correct every error of each pages ^^ The most important thing is that at least the page is understandable

Tools: a pencil for sketches, a mouse and Photoshop CS3.

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Mahkan will come soon....

Everything (C)

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